The beach

I am the sea
with my waves crashing
and smashing
on the land.

I am the sea
with seagulls
flying high above me
flapping all feathers over me

I am the sea
with pebbles laying under me
I smell like dirty salt water
when people drink me they will spit me out.

I am the sea
and look full of boats
Children splashing and crashing
waves on the sea shore. Full of pebbles and shells.

Teeth

If I don’t clean my teeth
they will go all rotten, stinky
yellow with plaque on them.

If I don’t clean my teeth
they will crack and snap.


If I don’t clean my teeth
When they are 70 years old,
they might have been pulled out
Because I am too lazy to brush them.


If I don’t clean my teeth
When I go to the dentist
I lay on the bed
the dentist will look in my mouth
and say “ you have one or two holes in every tooth”

“I’m going to have to pull them all out
and you will have to have false teeth”.

I wished I brushed my teeth




By Natalia

Teeth by Cassie

If I don’t brush my TEETH
they will go rotten and smelly.
They will be stinky, revolting teeth.

If I don’t clean my TEETH
they will hurt when I bite something.
It hurts because I don’t clean them.

If I don’t brush my TEETH
they will become rotten and gross.
I don’t want to go to the dentist
people will have to rip them out
I will have to have false TEETH.

I WANT TO LOOK AFTER MY TEETH

If I don’t brush my TEETH
they will go rotten and smelly.
They will be stinky, revolting teeth.

If I don’t clean my TEETH
they will hurt when I bite something.
It hurts because I don’t clean them.

If I don’t brush my TEETH
they will become rotten and gross.
I don’t want to go to the dentist
people will have to rip them out
I will have to have false TEETH.

I WANT TO LOOK AFTER MY TEETH

teeth by cassie

If I don't clean my teeth
I will get yellow, rotten and furry teeth
with jagged edges and cracks in them.



If I don't clean my teeth my bite will sting like a bumble bee
Or a wasp sting on the foot.
If I don't clean my teeth my teeth are old and fake and twenty-nine years old.
If I don't clean my teeth I’d need to have the drill or fillings.

So I'm going to brush my teeth.

ginant giant

Gentle Giant - Brandon

The Gentle Giant
Long long ago there lived a Gentle Giant living on a rain cloud in a Caslie He had a nice smile and lots of little friends. The Gentle Giant had built a big sandpit and had lots of trucks and diggers and cranes to play with, in it. When his friends came to play they would play in the sandpit and make lots of thingslike caslies and tonels
The children’s parents liked the Gentle Giant but got mad when everyone played in the sandpit because it would rain sand all over their houses and gardens below. Mums got angry because their floors were always sandy and when it rained it would get muddy. The people who liked gardening got mad because the leaves on the plants would break and they wouldn’t grow. The clothes always had sand through them when they were hanging on the washing line.The Gentle Giant was sad because the children were told not to play in the sandpit when they went to play with the Gentle Giant. He liked playing inside the caslie but he liked it better outside in the nice sunshine. He needed to work out how to fix the problem. Brandon

Feedback guidelines

We have begun our stories. Could you please make comments about our descriptive writing. Can you picture our settings (House in the cloud) and the character (The Gentle Giant) yet. If not could you give us some suggestions to make our stories more interesting. Please don't worry about our spelling as this is something we are working on in the classroom during editing.
Thank you for your help.

Gentle Giant-liam-2

Once upon a time there was a Gentle Giant with spicks all over his head that are sharpe as a nifk .The clouthes are metel armo that is gold and red legs,blue arms .The cloud is the shape of a tramplen and when they step on it they wiggle and jiggle like jelly.And taest like jelly and looks like jelly. There’s clouds that go’s up to the big cloud and they look like jelly.living on a cloud in a house. He was nice and had lots of little friends. The Gentle Giant had built a big sandpit and had lots of trucks and diggers to play with, in it. When his friends came to play they would play in the sandpit and make lots of things.
The children’s parents liked the Gentle Giant but got angry when everyone played in the sandpit because it would rain sand all over their houses and gardens below. Mums got grumpy because their floors were always sandy and when it rained it would get messy. The people who liked gardening got mad because the leaves on the plants would break and they wouldn’t grow. The clothes always had sand through them when they were hanging on the washing line.
The Gentle Giant got sad because the children were told not to play in the sandpit when they went and played with the Gentle Giant. He liked playing inside the house but he liked it better outside in the sunshine. He needed to work out how to fix the problem.

gentle giant 2- adrianna

long ago on a rainbow cloud in a house. He was nice and had lots of little friendsthat p lay with her play doughThe Gentle Giant had built a big sandpit and had lots of trucks and diggers to play with, in it. When his friends came to play they would play in the sandpit and make lots of things.
His house is like a King’s castle and the king’s castle colour is a purple castle it is made out of colour paper the door is as big as the giant.
The children’s parents liked the Gentle Giant but got angry when everyone played in the sandpit because it would rain sand all over their houses and gardens below. Mums got grumpy because their floors were always sandy and when it rained it would get messy. The people who liked gardening got mad because the leaves on the plants would break and they wouldn’t grow. The clothes always had sand through them when they were hanging on the washing line.
The Gentle Giant got sad because the children were told not to play in the sandpit when they went and played with the Gentle Giant. He liked playing inside the house but he liked it better outside in the sunshine. He needed to work out how to fix the problem.

the gentle giant jaelyn

Once upon a time there was a helpfull Gentle Giant living on a cloud in a house. He was nice and he had a Mohawk he has elevater claud he had a big swimming pool with a huge water slide in it his castles gold and has a fluffy claud . The Gentle Giant had built a big sandpit and had lots of huge trucks and diggers to play with, in it. When his friends came to play they would play in the sandy sandpit and make lots of cool things.

The Gentle Giant - Adrianna - Part 2

The Gentle Giant Once upon a time there was a Gentle smily Giant living on a rainbow cloud in a house. He was nice and had lots of little friends.that p lay with her play doughThe Gentle Giant had built a big sandpit and had lots of trucks and diggers to play with, in it. When his friends came to play they would play in the sandpit and make lots of things. His house is like a King’s castle and the king’s castle colour is a purple castle it is made out of colour paper the door is as big as the giant. The children’s parents liked the Gentle Giant but got angry when everyone played in the sandpit because it would rain sand all over their houses and gardens below. Mums got grumpy because their floors were always sandy and when it rained it would get messy. The people who liked gardening got mad because the leaves on the plants would break and they wouldn’t grow. The clothes always had sand through them when they were hanging on the washing line.The Gentle Giant got sad because the children were told not to play in the sandpit when they went and played with the Gentle Giant. He liked playing inside the house but he liked it better outside in the sunshine. He needed to work out how to fix the problem.

The Gentle Giant - Liam

The Gentle Giant
Once upon a time there was a Gentle Giant with spicks all over his head that are sharpe as a nifk .The clouthes are metel armo that is goldliving on a cloud in a house. He was nice and had lots of little friends. The Gentle Giant had built a big sandpit and had lots of trucks and diggers to play with, in it. When his friends came to play they would play in the sandpit and make lots of things.
The children’s parents liked the Gentle Giant but got angry when everyone played in the sandpit because it would rain sand all over their houses and gardens below. Mums got grumpy because their floors were always sandy and when it rained it would get messy. The people who liked gardening got mad because the leaves on the plants would break and they wouldn’t grow. The clothes always had sand through them when they were hanging on the washing line.
The Gentle Giant got sad because the children were told not to play in the sandpit when they went and played with the Gentle Giant. He liked playing inside the house but he liked it better outside in the sunshine. He needed to work out how to fix the problem.

The Gentle Giant - Izaac

The Gentle Giant
oncethere was a thartful Gentle Giant He was
talland big too. He was pink and frendlee and rindhes fat andwaers a orage hat. sandpit and had lots of trucks and diggers to play with, in it. When his friends came to play they would play in the sandpit and make lots of things.
The children’s parents liked the Gentle Giant but got angry when everyone played in the sandpit because it would rain sand all over their houses and gardens below. Mums got grumpy because their floors were always sandy and when it rained it would get messy. The people who liked gardening got mad because the leaves on the plants would break and they wouldn’t grow. The clothes always had sand through them when they were hanging on the washing line.
The Gentle Giant got sad because the children were told not to play in the sandpit when they went and played with the Gentle Giant. He liked playing inside the house but he liked it better outside in the sunshine. He needed to work out how to fix the problem.

The Gentle Giant

The Gentle Giant
Once upon a time there was a kind Gentle Giant living on a beautiful ronudcloud in a house. He was nice and had lots of nice little friends. She has

The kind Gentle Giant had built a big sandpit and had lots oflittle trucks and diggers to play with, in it. When his friends came to play they would play in the sandpit and make lots of cool things.
The children’s parents liked the Gentle Giant but got angry when everyone played in the sandpit because it would rain sand all over their houses and gardens below. Mums got grumpy because their floors were always sandy and when it rained it would get messy. The people who liked gardening got mad because the leaves on the plants would break and they wouldn’t grow. The clothes always had sand through them when they were hanging on the washing line.
The Gentle Giant got sad because the children were told not to play in the sandpit when they went and played with the Gentle Giant. He liked playing inside the house but he liked it better outside in the sunshine. He needed to work out how to fix the problem.

The Gentle Giant - Cali

The Gentle Giant
Once upon a time there was a Gentle Giant living on a puffy cloud in his house. He was nice and had lots of little friends. The Gentle Giant had built a big sandpit and had lots of trucks and diggers to play with, in it. When his friends came to play they would play in the sandpit and
make lots of sandcastles
The children’s parents liked the Gentle Giant but they got angry when everyone played in the sandpit because it would rain sand all over their houses and gardens below. Mums got grumpy because their floors were always had sand
and when it rained it would get messy. The people who liked gardening got mad because the leaves on the plants would break and they wouldn’t grow. thay clothes always had sand on them when they were hanging on the washing line.
The Gentle Giant got sad because the children were told not to play in the sandpit when they went and played with the Gentle Giant. He liked playing inside the house but he liked it better outside in the sunshine. He needed to work outside
The problem.

The Gentle Giant - Lylies

The Gentle Giant
Once upon a time there was a cuddly Gentle Giant living on a cloud in a house. He had a big big te/shirt
He was nice and with a coudly teadybear on its house and he was very helpful and warm and he was fatadand he was very nice and he was very very
tall and very hansim lots of little friends. The Gentle Giant had b uilt a big sandpit and had lots of trucks and diggers to play with, in it. When his friends came to play they would play in the sandpit and make lots of things.
The children’s parents liked the Gentle Giant but got angry when everyone played in the sandpit because it would rain sand all over their houses and gardens below. Mums got grumpy because their floors were always sandy and when it rained it would get messy. The people who liked gardening got mad because the leaves on the plants would break and they wouldn’t grow. The clothes always had sand through them when they were hanging on the washing line.
The Gentle Giant got sad because the children were told not to play in the sandpit when they went and played with the Gentle Giant. He liked playing inside the house but he liked it better outside in the sunshine. He needed to work out how to fix the problem.

amp the gentle giant - Adrianna

The Gentle Giant
Once upon a time there was a Gentle smily Giant living on a rainbow cloud in a house. He was nice and had lots of little friendsthat p lay with her play doughThe Gentle Giant had built a big sandpit and had lots of trucks and diggers to play with, in it. When his friends came to play they would play in the sandpit and make lots of things.
The children’s parents liked the Gentle Giant but got angry when everyone played in the sandpit because it would rain sand all over their houses and gardens below. Mums got grumpy because their floors were always sandy and when it rained it would get messy. The people who liked gardening got mad because the leaves on the plants would break and they wouldn’t grow. The clothes always had sand through them when they were hanging on the washing line.
The Gentle Giant got sad because the children were told not to play in the sandpit when they went and played with the Gentle Giant. He liked playing inside the house but he liked it better outside in the sunshine. He needed to work out how to fix the problem.

lylies

The Gentle Giant Once upon a time there was a cuddly Gentle Giant living on a cloud in a house. He had a big big te/shirt He was nice and with a coudly teadybear on its house and he was very helpful and warm and he was fathad lots of little friends. The Gentle Giant had b uilt a big sandpit and had lots of trucks and diggers to play with, in it. When his friends came to play they would play in the sandpit and make lots of things. The children’s parents liked the Gentle Giant but got angry when everyone played in the sandpit because it would rain sand all over their houses and gardens below. Mums got grumpy because their floors were always sandy and when it rained it would get messy. The people who liked gardening got mad because the leaves on the plants would break and they wouldn’t grow. The clothes always had sand through them when they were hanging on the washing line. The Gentle Giant got sad because the children were told not to play in the sandpit when they went and played with the Gentle Giant. He liked playing inside the house but he liked it better outside in the sunshine. He needed to work out how to fix the problem.

Liam

Jaelyn

Brodie

Who We Are

We have made word pictures using adjectives to describe ourselves.

Skoolstars

We are learning a song and putting dance moves to it. Have you heard us practicing at home and at school?

Cubs

We are the cubs and are part of Room 5 Lions. Welcome to our writing log. Our group will add work we have been doing in the class to the blog. We have Liam, Sarah, Aidan, Brodie, Izaac, Jaelyn, Lylies, Cali, Shyah and Adrianna in the Cubs.