Wednesday, May 5, 2010

Gentle Giant-liam-2

Once upon a time there was a Gentle Giant with spicks all over his head that are sharpe as a nifk .The clouthes are metel armo that is gold and red legs,blue arms .The cloud is the shape of a tramplen and when they step on it they wiggle and jiggle like jelly.And taest like jelly and looks like jelly. There’s clouds that go’s up to the big cloud and they look like jelly.living on a cloud in a house. He was nice and had lots of little friends. The Gentle Giant had built a big sandpit and had lots of trucks and diggers to play with, in it. When his friends came to play they would play in the sandpit and make lots of things.
The children’s parents liked the Gentle Giant but got angry when everyone played in the sandpit because it would rain sand all over their houses and gardens below. Mums got grumpy because their floors were always sandy and when it rained it would get messy. The people who liked gardening got mad because the leaves on the plants would break and they wouldn’t grow. The clothes always had sand through them when they were hanging on the washing line.
The Gentle Giant got sad because the children were told not to play in the sandpit when they went and played with the Gentle Giant. He liked playing inside the house but he liked it better outside in the sunshine. He needed to work out how to fix the problem.

1 comment:

  1. Your giant sounds like he is wearing a knights armour. He must be heavy walking around his cloud. Is that why your cloud is like wobbly jelly. Can you explain more about how the children go up the smaller clouds.

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